tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9175950398286031109.post3618491067055741414..comments2023-05-22T03:41:13.197-04:00Comments on The Six Day Race: A Ghazal: Sort ofB.R.http://www.blogger.com/profile/09073468276343663348noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9175950398286031109.post-16003479210690143272012-07-26T19:59:22.724-04:002012-07-26T19:59:22.724-04:00Hello Winnie,
Thanks so much for your generous com...Hello Winnie,<br />Thanks so much for your generous comment. The thunder storms are kicking up here - hope all is well on your end.<br />Peace,<br />B.R.B.R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/09073468276343663348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9175950398286031109.post-9478256342088475702012-07-26T08:14:46.733-04:002012-07-26T08:14:46.733-04:00Hi B.R.! Thanks for visiting my blog and your kind...Hi B.R.! Thanks for visiting my blog and your kind words. I come here and get lost in your poetry. I never heard of "ghazal" and am glad you put a link so I could read more about it. Very interesting. Your piece is awesome. I love the Trellis piece using the picture of your bicycle and the one about the passing of the gentleman. You write with such feeling. Have a great day!Winniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15926597921523807422noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9175950398286031109.post-19111535103612107452012-07-26T00:30:32.446-04:002012-07-26T00:30:32.446-04:00Hey Amber,
Thanks for dropping by!
I followed the ...Hey Amber,<br />Thanks for dropping by!<br />I followed the ideas of <i>sher</i> (2-line couplets) and <i>beher</i> (consistent meter) fairly closely and even <i>maqta</i> (ending couplet with "signature"). Played around with the <i>radif</i> (recurring end-word for each couplet) and <i>matla</i> (internal rhymes) though.<br />Peace,<br />B.R.B.R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/09073468276343663348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9175950398286031109.post-84617296477548004862012-07-25T22:29:53.269-04:002012-07-25T22:29:53.269-04:00LOVE IT!LOVE IT!Amberhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09647324012823012862noreply@blogger.com