tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9175950398286031109.post481200439995306689..comments2023-05-22T03:41:13.197-04:00Comments on The Six Day Race: Poem for FridayB.R.http://www.blogger.com/profile/09073468276343663348noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9175950398286031109.post-51930236584689641092012-12-15T23:07:53.634-05:002012-12-15T23:07:53.634-05:00Amber,
Wow! What a great and attuned reader you ar...Amber,<br />Wow! What a great and attuned reader you are. In the 3rd stanza the speaker begins to "act out" the longing of the heart in the quickened streamlet of words from "pursued" to "soothed." And then, in the final stanza, the speaker regathers himself/herself and plays the part of analytic one again. Thanks so much for your confirmatory comment - I was wondering if I had totally blown conveying this...<br />Peace,<br />B.R.B.R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/09073468276343663348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9175950398286031109.post-52503365156553199252012-12-15T22:42:48.737-05:002012-12-15T22:42:48.737-05:00Love. Love the voice here, of the first, second a...Love. Love the voice here, of the first, second and last stanzas, and how the third stanza provides a counterpoint to those surrounding - the listing, the rush of words is nice. Amberhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09647324012823012862noreply@blogger.com