tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9175950398286031109.post5506769701862719633..comments2023-05-22T03:41:13.197-04:00Comments on The Six Day Race: The SuitorB.R.http://www.blogger.com/profile/09073468276343663348noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9175950398286031109.post-72062692330725101312012-12-02T19:28:25.517-05:002012-12-02T19:28:25.517-05:00Hey Amber,
Thanks for the generous comment. Methin...Hey Amber,<br />Thanks for the generous comment. Methinks the 5-syllable lines helped the pacing (as you noticed) without using ultra-short lines like in "Lot's Wife" (which was extremely confined rhetorically). <br />This was sort of new (quasi-narrative) territory for me - glad you liked it!<br />Peace,<br />B.R.B.R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/09073468276343663348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9175950398286031109.post-10391898708117516332012-12-02T17:56:40.017-05:002012-12-02T17:56:40.017-05:00Nice one. I like the speed of this, the pacing - ...Nice one. I like the speed of this, the pacing - it rushes right through.Amberhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09647324012823012862noreply@blogger.com