no need
to reach
some far-
flung star
to see
the sites
on venus
or mars
to un-
maybe
the mights
to dis-
cover
the heights
to seize
the halos
of un-
manned flight
Hello WB Thank you for the kind comment, and for being such an insightful reader. That is, indeed, the whole hinge and central move of the poem. Cheers, B.R.
no need
to reach
some far-
flung star
to see
the sites
on venus
or mars
to un-
maybe
the mights
to dis-
cover
the heights
to seize
the halos
of un-
manned flight
to un-
ReplyDeletemaybe
the mights
There's a great aim perfectly expressed.
Hello WB
ReplyDeleteThank you for the kind comment, and for being such an insightful reader. That is, indeed, the whole hinge and central move of the poem.
Cheers,
B.R.