07 September 2012

Fox at Sundown

the flame-dipped day is done
the blur of fox
into the black wood

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    1. Hey Amber,
      Thanks for your note. Kept dinking around with this one - making it longer, line-break variations, trying to force syllables to make a haiku. But kept coming back to this stripped-down original version.
      Peace,
      B.R.

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