07 September 2012

Fox at Sundown

the flame-dipped day is done
the blur of fox
into the black wood
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  1. AmberSeptember 7, 2012 at 11:43 PM

    love: "flame-dipped day"

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    1. B.R.September 8, 2012 at 11:32 AM

      Hey Amber,
      Thanks for your note. Kept dinking around with this one - making it longer, line-break variations, trying to force syllables to make a haiku. But kept coming back to this stripped-down original version.
      Peace,
      B.R.

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