
The sleet had brought down the
limbs which had brought down the
wires which had brought out the
big utility trucks
Stacked neatly now, the limbs
on the ground ― all their sawn-ends
on one end ― all their swab-tips
on the other:
Silver with impending
Spring, mossy-soft antler nubs ―
Spongy, fuzzy, undone
buds ― icy glazing gone
The deep ruts left by the
heavy trucks, they shimmer
with windy pools of water:
blue-eyed with clearing sky
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ReplyDeleteHey Amber,
DeleteThanks for your note - and the feedback on the title.
Cheers.
B.R.
mossy-soft antler nubs-
ReplyDeleteSpongy, fuzzy, undone
buds - icy glazing gone
The rhyming here is magical.
WB
DeleteThank you for your kind comment. Hope all is well on your end.
B.R.