25 June 2013

we just call ’im dovie ’cause he bristles at lovie

entranced with enough
english
dovie’s cue ball’ll walk

duly to the new
striking
place and the waiting

cue: already scuffed
and chaulked
and armed with powder

blue kisses
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  1. Mose23June 28, 2013 at 1:06 PM

    Some great line breaks here, letting the allusions tremble - second stanza especially.

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    1. B.R.June 29, 2013 at 12:31 PM

      W.B.

      Thanks for your kind note. And for noticing & noting the line breaks...

      Cheers,
      B.R.

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